May 23rd, 2025
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On Monday, I ran a guest session inside the Part Time YouTuber Academy to 100+ creators.
The students asked a lot of great questions, so today I'll reveal how I answered these 4:
But first, I'm super excited to announce...
If you want more bite-sized scriptwriting advice - you'll enjoy the skits we've got coming!
My first proper reel is about "blob scripts" - my unusual method for writing a V1 hook without getting overwhelmed! π
I'd be over the moon if you could show it some love!
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So, onto the questions that came up at my guest session...
The person asking this was making a video called "5 worst cars to buy in 2025".
In any sort of listicle (or any "dry" topic), I'm always looking for the drama.
Sure, droning on about the specs of the cars might be boring:
"Moving on to car number 3. It goes 0-60 in 8.5s, and it's got a 7 inch long handbreak. Despite its German manufacturer's reputation for excellence, I don't like the angle of the windshield..." π΄
But finding the worst or weirdest or most expensive thing and using that as the curiosity-inducing crux is not:
"Moving on to number 3 - and this car did something so bizarre during my test drive that I will never get in a Mercedes again."
Unlike educational scripting, a lot of entertainment scripting happens after filming.
I worked with Mike Shake back in 2023 - before filming, they wouldn't plan much more than locations and "props".
Then, they'd shoot for 2-3 days.
After that, it was my job as the scriptwriter to review that footage and help them create the story by:
You're not trying to fake anything... you're just being brutal about what footage your audience will actually care about.
They were some of the most fun scripts I ever got to work on π
Right now, it's mostly focussed on hooks.
If you haven't already, check out:
But I have so much more I want to do. I'm currently working on GPTs that:
This question assumes the most exciting thing has to happen at the end, which is rarely the case.
For video essays or educational content answering a single question, the audience might not understand the "main question: until the end...
...but the individual (smaller) questions posed throughout the video can be equally exciting.
Imagine a video essay exposing a famous con-artist.
The "big reveal" might be the moment they finally get exposed.
But there's a TONNE of drama in the build up - examples of the different cons they've pulled, maybe a story from their childhood that explains their current behaviour, perhaps an occasion they were nearly caught, etc.
Or, take a dry example like "how I built my new shed" (bad title, don't steal it).
The big reveal is... the finished shed.
But the 10 steps it took to build it - including the delays, weather problems and an accidentally stubbed toe - they're all interesting moments in the build up to that final reveal.
It's about finding the drama and story (yes, story - even in the dryest educational topics) during the small moments, not thinking you have to make the final moment the most exciting.
That's all for this week.
Any questions? You can to reply to this email and I'll get back to you.
Speak soon,
George π
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