Video 1: Word-for-word; 2-3 hours spent scripting.
Video 2: Bullet point; 30 minutes spent scripting; converted from a newsletter, and mostly riffed based on the original copy.
Today, I'm sharing some quick reflections on both experiences to help you refine your own writing/filming workflow.
(And to help you feel less alone in the endlessly weird life of a YouTuber! 😆)
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Despite working with YouTubers for 4 years, appearing on loads of podcasts and generally being confident in front of a crowd... actually turning the camera on changes something.
I recorded an entire script and started again because I felt so wooden.
Reflections on Word-for-Word scripting:
Without a teleprompter, word-for-word scripts are semi-useless.
Glancing back and forth at a word-for-word script and trying to remember the line before delivering it feels almost no different to using bullet points.
If you don't have a teleprompter, it's probably not worth writing word-for-word.
Pressure felt way higher.
Because I'd honed the script to try and make it awesome, I felt pressure to deliver every line perfectly.
Unlike bullet point scripting (where my delivery could elevate the script), delivering word-for-word lines felt like I had more to lose!
I felt in control.
All that being said, I turned the camera off feeling confident in how the final product will turn out.
I don't have the same level of certainty with my bullet point video - even though (as we'll see) I had more fun making it.
Reflections on Bullet Point scripting:
Don't try to be word-perfect.
You're not livestreaming - you can cut things! I know this goes against my usual advice of "don't rely on the edit to save you".
But if you are recording a bullet point script, it's better to let your thoughts flow (knowing you can trim them down) than to overthink every sentence and make 0 progress.
I had way more fun.
Eeeek. Business model imploding. Scripting is... less fun?? Well... kinda. For context, I would have been lost without the structure (which looked like this...)
But the actual process of delivery was a lot more enjoyable. Without the structure, however, I'm not sure I'd have had so much fun.
I forgot what I'd said a lot (which was stressful).
For all that I said about having more fun, I had several moments where I was 30 seconds into a riff, messed it up, then couldn't remember where to restart my spiel.
Practice makes perfect, but... this is the reality of riffing. It's a sign that my "perfect" level of scripting is slightly higher than pure bullets, but still not word-for-word.
That's all for this week.
Any questions? You can to reply to this email and I'll get back to you.
Speak soon, George 👋
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