May 30th, 2025
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This week, I discovered a simple retention "trick" you can write into your next script regardless of your niche.
Even cooler, this "trick" will:
Ready? Let's goooo...
I talk a lot about setup + tension + payoff.
Think of your scripts as a series of "segments" (e.g. topics), where each segment is broken into those three parts:
But the question I get asked constantly is:
"How do I delay the payoff without my audience getting annoyed?"
In other words, what does "tension" actually look like in a script?
Well, the retention "trick" I noticed this week helps explain this.
Let's imagine we're writing a script about making amazing pour-over coffee.
Segment 1 might be about the gear you'll need to achieve this.
So let's think about setup + tension + payoff for this segment...
For a segment like this, it feels quite hard to delay the payoff, right?
We start by saying they'll need specific gear. We finish by telling them what that gear is.
So... what else is there to say in between?
Over the last 2 weeks, I've reviewed a bunch of retention graphs for clients, students and even a friend from Twitter.
They're all in different niches, but I noticed retenton was flat whenever any of them used this "trick".
In a nutshell:
✅ Spend more time showing your expertise, even if it means delaying the payoff for an uncomfortable length of time.
That means, if you have particular insider knowledge about a specific topic, you must learn to be comfortable spending more time talking about it.
With our coffee video, here's the difference:
The second way delays the payoff, but allows the viewer to deepen their knowledge, get excited about the payoff, and see you as more of an expert.
It's not just about saying, "this really popular coffee grinder is actually bad!!!"
It's about deliberately spending more time "behind the scenes", flexing your expertise, and drilling down into why you hold your opinion.
What this looks like in other niches:
Giving interview advice:
Reviewing iPhone apps:
Solving a math problem:
Don't be afraid to linger on your expertise.
It might feel uncomfortable, but it's highly likely your viewers will actually appreciate it... meaning more watch time + increased authority.
(Not to mention longer videos, and therefore increased potential for ad revenue.)
IN OTHER NEWS:
After 2+ years sending emails through Kit, I saw their CEO, Nathan Barry, was doing a casual meetup in London...
Such a pleasure to meet both Nathan and Creator Partnerships Manager, Haley!
In the last year, I've attended VidSummit and Sponsor Games, and I'm 100% sold on the power of in-person meetups.
Take the opportunity when you can!
That's all for this week.
Any questions? You can to reply to this email and I'll get back to you.
Speak soon,
George 👋
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