Payoff

Do this before your “Grand Payoff”

May 5th, 2023

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Scriptwriting tip of the week

Somehow, I always end up procrastinating writing the hook.

It just feels too important and I get scared 😅

But, if you can break it down and think of it in simple terms, it’s way easier to write something that resonates with your audience…

How do you approach writing your intro? Hit reply and let me know! ✍️

Here are this week’s retention reviews…

Video #1

Title: Is it Possible to Escape this Nether Roof Trap?

Creator: Cristalit

Average % viewed: 39.3%

In this review:
How to make your audience resonate emotionally with your content.

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Make your next edit less painful 😫

Wanna save a ton of time on the boring, repetitive tasks that pop up in every single edit?

Cutting the “ums” and “ahs” is one thing, but what about trawling through your 17 bad takes before you find “the one”?

BORED.

Gling is a nifty little tool made specifically for YouTubers that does all that for you.

(Yes, it even detects and removes bad takes 😱)

It’s literally only $5 per video, but if you fancy trying it first…

Use the code “RETENTION” for a free month, on me 😏


Yep, I’m In!

If you’re still not sure, check out the video below to see it in action…

Video #2

Title: This AI Video Editing Tool Will BLOW Your MIND

Creator: Rafael Ludwig

Average % viewed: 29.4%

In this review:
The problem that befalls most creators who speak “off the cuff”.

Read it now

Video #3

Title: I Went Viral on TikTok Using ONLY AI

Creator: Taylor Moyle

Average % viewed: 34.3%

In this review:
The critical thing that needs to happen right before your “big payoff”.

Read it now

That’s all for now! I’m going away for a week, so I may be a little slow at replying (but I shall miss you dearly, of course!).

Speak soon,

George 👋

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