September 12th, 2025
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This week, one of my students shared a hook he was working on for a new script.
Alongside it, he shared an AI rewrite of the same hook.
His question was simple: "Which do you prefer?"
A few of us debated this in the comments underneath, and something unexpected happened:
None of us agreed.
This lack of consensus intrigued me, so I decided to discuss the topic on my podcast, Making It.
My co-hosts, Jamie and Gwilym, are two YouTube strategy people, and I wanted to know whether they'd be able to reach a consensus.
So I created a little game for them 😈
I broke down each version of the hook - the human version, and the AI version - into 7 key "moments".
My co-hosts had two tasks:
Their responses were... incredibly revealing 👀
This was pretty much what I'd expected.
AI outputs have plenty of little "tells" that reveal a human didn't write it, so I wasn't surprised they'd correctly identified then.
But then something happened that I really didn't expect.
To finish the episode, we read both hooks, one after the other, in full.
And despite having overwhelmingly preferred the human writing in the individual sentences...
...when taken as a whole, they actually preferred the AI version.
Even though its its individual sentences felt clunky, the flow of the AI - the way it was structured - made it feel like a more complete package.
That's all for this week.
Although, I'm curious... from the example I shared, can you tell which is AI-written?
Hit reply and let me know!
Speak soon,
George 👋
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